Year 10 Josie N’s Poem Accepted into Anthology
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Mazal tov to Year 10 student Josie N, whose poem entitled Twelfth Hole was chosen to be published in the Primo Lux poetry anthology, an annual publication featuring creative literature works by skilled young student communicators across WA and supported by WA Poets Inc.
Tasked with writing a poem, the location being somewhere the writer often finds themselves and where “something had to happen”, Josie, a keen golfer, chose her local golf course as her poem’s setting.
“My golf course is pretty secluded and private, so I was thinking it would be cool to slip something ominous in there. I’ve left it open-ended, to leave people questioning ‘why the golf course?’
I didn’t want to use my bedroom, or somewhere at school, I wanted somewhere a bit different. I’m the only student in the High School who plays golf, so that seemed like the perfect location.”
Josie says the lack of rhyming and the unpredictable line lengths of her poem are meant to fit in with the ominous undertones of uncertainty that emerge as the poem unfolds, as well as the ultimate surprise at the end, which is also open to interpretation.
Twelfth Hole
Sweat drips from my head
The sun’s blazing embrace
My bottle dry
My eyes straining
The twelfth hole
I’ve played this hole a hundred times
Maybe a thousand
Slowly back
Shoulders only
Eyes on the ball
Hit through and true
The hybrid hits, impacts with the ball
Left it flies
Bush
Searching only adds to the heat and frustration
Found it!
The ball buries itself in the dirt and left-overs of dead trees
Finally,
I can hit again
Adjusting my stance to take the next shot
I glance below my feet
Another face glances back
Life drained from its empty eyes.
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